Here’s a sonnet trying to capture a moment and make it more than it was, and exactly what it was. It was with a bird, of course. Happy Friday!
First Flight
The hawk’s flight flew me as we went along
Together for a pair of football fields
In perfect flapping union. I’m not wrong
To say so even though I had to yield
To traffic as he whirled away from view
And my quick craning neck could Oh! But catch
A fading sense of where he must have flew.
But let my mind be forever feather etched,
May flying be remembered as my own,
May that correlation of car and wing
Persist among the things my heart has known,
And may whizzing wheels forever sing
Of more than locomotion on a road —
Of soaring joy and glory overflowed.
You can listen to me read it here
Poem and image by Ben White
2 responses to “First Flight – another Friday Sonnet”
I must try and put my words into a structure one of these days
I am inspired by you!!
This is so lovely
My fave line is
But let my mind be forever feather etched
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Thanks. I love the process
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